Changes in the editing process

We finished editing our O.T.S and we let our teacher view it so that she could give us some feed back and some bits to change. Today, we edited again and the changes we made were, we changed the size of all of the clips so that the screen was 'letterbox', we had to change some of the names as our teacher said the same names we appearing to much so we made some names up. We also slowed the names down as before they went to quickly and you didnt have time to read them. Another change was because of the monologue, as the one we had was to short so Ben C spoke instaed of the original person. we havent done this yet but we have taken the sound out, so we just need to put ythe new sound in. We also were told to dub out Marks and Anna's voices and put them in again as they were to quiet. Our teacher also suggested that we turn the brightness down, which we have yet to do as we ran out of time today, it would take a bit of time as we would have to go through every clip and do it for each clip as they vary from what they show and what the brightness is already.